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Career Clubs International Reprint: Edlunds' Pick Your Job -- and Land It!


CHAPTER 4

Prepare Your Sales Presentation:
Portfolios

You are going to integrate all the facts you've collected about your career and yourself into a campaign to sell your services. This will take time and effort. For you are selling the most complex product ever made -- yourself.

Sure, you can most likely find a job without all this preparation. But you must decide if you want a job or the job. You might even get the job you want with an off-the-cuff search. We can only say that all our experience indicates the odds are far more in your favor when you go through this step-by-step approach.

[Edward Bronson, Research Chemist]

A case in point, and an excellent one, is that of Edward Bronson. He is a tall, sensitive man, and when we met him discouragement was plainly written on his face. He was out of work. He hadn't been out long, only a month. But that month convinced him he had no hope of finding anything in his own line.

"But how could you even scratch the surface in one month?" we protested.

"It's a very unusual case," explained Mr. Bronson. "I'm a research chemist in one of the newer types of plastics. There are only eleven firms in the country where I can get the job I want. I just left one of them. I contacted the other ten and they all say, ‘Not a chance.' They all need what I can do for them, but they don't know it. So you can see, I'm completely stymied." <pg. 57>

"Stymied, perhaps. But one can play out of a stymie. Let's see if you can't lick this one."

With so few prospects Mr. Bronson had to devise an unusually fine selling campaign. He already knew no definite openings existed in these firms. Hence he had to create a demand for his type of service, then prove he was the man to meet that demand. This called for a high order of salesmanship.

Mr. Bronson based his campaign on careful research -- on individual study of each company, its needs, its problems, and the personalities of its executives. He picked the three most promising firms and made an intensive study of their products, the share of the national market held by each, their methods of distribution and display, their advertising. He sought personal introductions to several leading executives in each firm. He went back again and again with material of vital interest to them. He built three portfolios, similar in detail, but each one slanted directly at one of the prospects.

 

When his study led him to believe that one of the three firms was not in a good position to use the special service he wanted to sell, he substituted a fourth for it, and made a similar study.

Of course, this cost him much, much time and effort. He could have dropped back to less specialized work where the demand was greater, the income less, and the jobs came faster. But Mr. Bronson preferred to stick to his major goal. And in six months he created a position for himself in one of the ten firms.

Some four months later a second one sought him out with an offer. He did not care to change, but the second offer did cause his employers to give him a substantial increase in salary.

Without a carefully planned campaign Mr. Bronson was stymied; the campaign landed him neatly in the cup.

You may be in no position to wait six months, six weeks, or even six days. In that case you have to take any job -- fast. But you can still plan and carry out your campaign for the job you want on your own time. In such a case don't overlook the possibility that the position you want may exist in the place you now work. Should that be true, aim your campaign at your new boss.

"Agreed," you say, "I see the need to prepare a sound campaign. But what goes into a good campaign?" <pg. 58>

"What do you mean -- ‘good'?" we shoot back. "Good for whom? Good for a youngster just out of school? Good for a man who wants to convert from one field to another? For someone looking ahead in his present job? For someone out of a job?"

Quite clearly, every situation is different and every campaign must be tailor-made to fit the particular case. What is a good campaign for one may prove disastrous for someone else.

Don't overplay your hand. A good campaign does you full justice -- but is geared to your own level. A substantial portfolio that is quite in order for an executive with an impressive record, may seem presumptuous or overdone for a raw beginner. An eye-catching stunt may hit the jackpot for a copywriter or publicity man but seem brash and undignified for a bank executive.

Your campaign material must represent you. Otherwise you defeat your own purpose. If someone else, professional or otherwise, writes your resumes or letters for you, they won't be you. They may give impressions that won't stand up in the subsequent interview.

[Arnold Craigin]

Arnold Craigin, for example, came to the Clinic for help in planning his interviews. The letter he sent out brought a remarkable number of good leads. Getting interviews was not his problem. But his interviews always went wrong. The employer always received him with interest but as the interview moved along the atmosphere changed and Mr. Craigin would find himself on the defensive.

We asked to see the letter. Then we discussed his experience as one would in an interview. The two did not fit together, the letter and the man.

"Did you write this letter yourself?" we asked Mr. Craigin. "Why no," he replied. "I hired someone who does direct-mail advertising to work it up for me."

No wonder the interviews went sour! The picture that letter painted was evidently attractive to many employers. But it was not a true picture of Mr. Craigin.

Oversold by that letter, Mr. Craigin couldn't measure up in the interview. This put him at such a disadvantage that he couldn't sell the excellent experience he did have.

Besides, what matters most is what happens in your mind when <pg. 59> you do it yourself. The increased confidence you gain is of greatest value in making you a more positive personality. After you have done all the thinking and work you can do with advantage, then use skilled friends or good professional resume writers as critics and editors.

With this necessary digression out of the way, we can now examine the elements of an adequate campaign. We will list them first, then discuss each in detail:

1. The Sales Presentation
  A. The portfolio
  B. The resume
  C. The letter of endorsement
  D. The prospecting letter to get you leads
     a. The shotgun approach
     b. The rifle approach
2. Third Party Letters
3. Master letters for answering ads
4. Situation-wanted ads
5. Your prospect list
   A.  Researching your market

You are not likely to need all these campaign tools. But after studying each case carefully, you can choose more wisely those that fit your situation.

THE SALES PRESENTATION

We use the term "sales presentation" because it points directly to what your campaign should be -- not a search for a job but a sale of a service.

Remember you are a product on the job market. Now the way a master salesman sells is not by looking to build his own income. Rather, he offers services that will benefit his prospect. The better he knows his product, the more invitingly he wraps it in service form, the more he will sell.

Keep that image before you constantly. You are a product. Know yourself thoroughly. Package yourself as a service to your prospect. Make him want to buy, make him feel you're giving him a chance on a good thing. Don't ask him for a job, offer him a deal he can't afford to pass up. <pg. 60>

This does not mean you must be brash about it. On the contrary. Be sincere and convincing. Above all be specific. Prove you have a service he needs.

"What do my prospects want? How can I show I have it? What else have I got they can use?"

In those questions lies the secret of a successful campaign. And remember, you have the answers in your work sheets on the job requirements and your own assets. And now, those illustrations you dug out will have redoubled value. They will be your service package.

An interesting case of the power of selling a service came to light when we conducted a job clinic for the welfare clients in Greenwich, Connecticut, during the depression. The Welfare officials arranged for the Clinic in order to help their clients find employment.

[Stanley Koloski, Lawn Care]

After our first session Stanley Koloski, a pleasant, weatherbeaten man of about sixty, stopped to talk with us. In broken English, but with touching sincerity, he told us how much he hated being on relief. But elderly and unskilled as he was, he could find no work anywhere.

Regularly, he made the rounds of the fine private homes in Greenwich asking if he could mow the lawns. He liked to mow lawns because it kept him in the open and reminded him of his days on the farm in the "old country."

Besides, he added, he knew all about crab grass, how it spread and ruined lawns, and how to combat it. Still, while he was hired occasionally, he did not earn enough to warrant giving up his relief checks.

"You say you know a lot about crab grass," we said, "could you tell us something about it?"

For all his broken English, Mr. Koloski gave us what amounted to a scientific lecture on the propagation and control of crab grass.

"You certainly know your subject," we told him. "But now, Mr. Koloski, what do you say when you go around ringing doorbells?"

"I just ask. 'Can I mow your lawn, lady?'" he replied.

"You've proved you have a lot more to sell than just mowing a lawn. You have a real service to offer. With your knowledge of how to control crab grass, you can save expensively seeded lawns <pg. 61> from ruin. And you can always keep them looking their best.

"The next time you go out," we went on, "why don't you try a different way? Study each lawn before you ring the doorbell. Then you can say, 'Madam, I'd like to show you how I can save your lawn from ruin.'

"Point out all the spots infected by crab grass. Explain why you've got to root it out regularly. You can finish up by saying, 'If I work on your lawn one day a week it will always keep in good shape and you'll never be bothered by crab grass. And it will only cost you $10 a week.'"

Mr. Koloski thanked us and said he would try it that day. He practiced on his case worker first in order to get his presentation down pat. Then he made his rounds again.

The response was overwhelming. Not only was he able to get off the relief rolls but he got enough work -- with regular clients at regular times -- to hire an assistant.

[Barrett Havens, General Manager]

Stranger still was the case of Barrett Havens. For he was an executive with a remarkable sales record and all-around business ability. And he brought to the Clinic one of the finest written presentations we have ever seen.

Mr. Havens had been assistant to the owner of a wood-working plant. In reality he was general manager. Under his leadership the firm's sales curve went up consistently. He developed new product and new markets for old ones and almost completely eliminated the seasonal ups and downs of the business.

He had also been a trade association executive and had worked out plans that brought the industry new markets and considerably improved profits. These accomplishments were strikingly told by copy and by charts in a handsome portfolio.

All of us at the Clinic applauded this presentation. We could offer no criticisms. "But," said Mr. Havens, "the portfolio can't be good, because it's not doing the job. I've gone over it with prospect after prospect. They praise my work and this presentation. Often they refer me to some other firm."

Yet the interviews were always too short to indicate any real interest in him. He was at a loss to know why. So were we.

Then someone in the audience took the floor. "I think this is a wonderful portfolio," he said, "and Mr. Havens should certainly <pg. 62> keep on using it. But aren't we all forgetting one of the key principles you always pound home here? Is Mr. Havens using his portfolio to sell a service or to look for a job?"

That was all the clue we needed. The group suggested that instead of going through his presentation with the prospect, he ask questions: Had they been able to level out their seasonal slumps? How did they develop new products? Had they been able to get appreciable help from their dealers in demonstrating and displaying their products?

Such questions would start the conversation on the prospect's interests. Mr. Havens could then tell of similar problems he had met, dramatizing his results by reference to those parts of his portfolio which illustrated the points under discussion. Mr. Havens had already grasped the idea on his own.

A week later we received a letter from Havens telling of one interview in which the prospect became so interested he canceled his luncheon date in order to continue the conversation. Several other interviews were equally satisfactory.

 

Once he looked upon himself in the same light as other products he had successfully marketed, Mr. Havens had no difficulty in appealing to his prospects' self-interest. He showed them how his experience fitted their problems -- and got his job.

Quite often men and women of executive caliber run into the same snag. They are so used to dealing with commercial and industrial services that they can't adjust to selling their own. All it takes is awareness of what a job campaign is and the skillful packaging of your material.

The Portfolio

When you put your campaign into motion, a letter designed to secure interviews will often be your opening shot. Everything else is by way of being follow-up, clincher material. However, since the portfolio is by its very nature the most inclusive form of presentation, we start our discussion with that.

A good portfolio will serve as a basis for everything you do in your job hunt. From it you will take the material you need for any letter you may write. It will form the backbone of the story you tell in your interviews. The portfolio itself can be used in the interview with telling effect. Skillfully handled, it can enable <pg. 63> you to steer the interview in the direction you want it to go. Perhaps its best use is as a "smash" follow-up to promising interviews.

A portfolio, or brochure, takes a lot of work, but it makes the fullest use of your talents. You can run a successful campaign without it -- in some cases it won't even fit. But where it can be used, it adds a marked plus-factor.

Working one up makes you so much more aware of your abilities, that the "sell" part of your campaign becomes easier. In the very process of preparing such a promotion booklet, you build yourself up for a better job. To illustrate:

[Jim Russell, Wall Street]

Back in the depression days, Jim Russell, an old friend of ours, lost his Wall Street job. This stunned him; he never dreamed it could happen to him. He tried hard for a new connection, but times were bad. He didn't make much headway.

One night he and Mrs. Russell came over for dinner. Jim sat there, the very picture of discouragement. Inevitably, conversation centered on Jim's troubles and we all discussed the problem.

"Why don't you prepare a brochure?" we asked. "In that way you can dramatize your accomplishments."

"A booklet? Me?" he asked. "Whatever would I put into it?"

"Well, I think it's a good idea," Mrs. Russell chipped in. So we all went to work on Jim, drawing out of him all the things he'd done on his job.

At the beginning Jim was plainly skeptical. Then, as he got going and gave us illustrations of his work, he began to be amazed. He knew he had done his job, all right, but he never felt he had done anything special.

All the accounting records of his firm had been under his wing. As he told us about it, two things stood out.

He always made a practice of tracking down every financial problem the customers faced, and checking their financial standing. He gave all this important material to the appropriate members of the firm.

He also took it upon himself to handle every complaint that passed through his department. He would search out what underlay the trouble and see to it that the customer got a full and courteous answer. This was invaluable in creating and maintaining good will.

By this time Jim was busily writing down some of these stories. <pg. 64>

Since it is often effective to include a letter of endorsement in a portfolio, we suggested he ask his old boss for one.

"But be sure he makes it specific," we said, "something that will back up the story you're going to sell."

What followed was almost unbelievable. Jim went up to see his former employer. "Mr. Perkins," he said, "I'm working on a plan to get a new job and I wonder if you'd help me out."

"Of course," said Mr. Perkins.

"I think it would help if you wrote a letter about me. I've put down some things I've done for the firm and if it's all right with you, I'd appreciate your including them in the letter."

"Let's see what you have there."

When Mr. Perkins looked over the material, he was as amazed as Jim had been. "Hey," he said, "we'd better not lose you."

And then and there he went into an inner office to consult with his partners. When he returned, he offered Jim a better job than he had before and at a higher salary. Jim went back to take over direction of all records, customer contact, and correspondence.

Clinic experience discloses many other advantages a portfolio offers. It has, for example, a positive psychological effect.

We all tend to take a person on his own valuation -- when it isn't too blatant. If you fill a portfolio with variations on "I'm good, I am," unsupported by evidence, you will only repel your prospects.

But a portfolio prepared in good taste, no matter how modest the claims or the experience, supported by evidence rather than opinions unobtrusively shows that you set a high value on yourself, your services and your time.

[Ruth Seamore, Statistician]

A portfolio has the added virtue in that in itself it shows what you can do. Ruth Seamore makes this point in a letter she sent to us some years ago.

Ruth was a college senior at a time when jobs were difficult to get. She came to New York during her Easter vacation and attended a session of the Man Marketing Clinic.

There she heard how others had succeeded in selling their services. Though she lacked their experience, she did have the imagination to adapt the selling principles involved to her own qualifications. She dug out of her school record enough assets to justify telling her story in a portfolio. <pg. 65>

Into it went a record of her scholastic work; comments from her teachers; a record of her outside activities and student honors. And since she wished to become a statistician, she featured copies of several statistical studies she had made for the dean's office, together with a complimentary letter from the dean himself.

Ruth had no trouble getting the job she wanted. After she had been working for some months she sent us this letter:

The use of my portfolio was of great assistance to me in getting my job. It is probably not uncommon for an advertising man of experience to present his qualifications in such a manner, but it is seldom that a person just starting out takes that means of showing the qualifications he has. After watching the girls who apply for positions at our office, I am of the opinion that few of them make the most of what they have to offer. Either they give the appearance of having little interest in whether they get a job or not, or else they seem entirely too eager for anything in the way of work.

My portfolio helped me do away with the disadvantage of both these attitudes. It made it simple for me to show a definite interest in business and a particular kind of work. It helped me present my qualifications more clearly. It showed originality and initiative. The portfolio in itself was a very good example of the type of work I could do.

Ruth's experience raises another point. Many people regard the use of a portfolio as something unique to a person of vast background, or from a special field such as advertising or publicity. Actually, it can be used to good effect for a beginner and for those applying for modest jobs. In those cases, of course, keep it simple, keep it on your own level.

For example, a stenographer might put together just three or four neatly typed pages telling her story, together with several commendatory letters from former employers. And a beginner in a field where creative imagination counts might well do as Doris Blake did.

[Doris Blake, Fashion Retailing]

While she was still in high school, Doris knew she wanted to work with women's clothes -- either design them or sell them. So she chose a college that had special courses in this field.

She studied dressmaking, millinery, principles of design. In addition, she took several art courses and some purely cultural subjects. Upon graduation she got a temporary position as sales clerk. <pg. 66>

She then enrolled in the Tobe-Coburn School for Fashion Careers in New York City. There she worked on practical problems of fashion promotion under leaders in the field. During two six-week vacations she sold behind the counters of leading New York stores.

She talked with many people who worked in the field. She decided she would like to be promotion manager for a large store. Of course, she wasn't ready for it, but that was the goal she set.

She was told she needed a firmer foundation of actual selling before going into promotion. But she didn't want to go in as just another sales clerk and be left behind the counter. She wanted to work in many departments; she wanted the chance to have some of her ideas used, if they were any good.

So she welcomed a school suggestion that she make up a little folder to show she had assets not usually found among applicants for junior selling jobs. First she listed the qualifications needed for both the selling job and her eventual promotion position, and placed alongside this list ideas on how to show she had these qualifications. Here is her work sheet:

Qualifications Desirable Demonstrate I Have Them
Knowledge of clothing design College courses
Feeling for fabrics: line, color, suitability Courses. Also selecting and making clothes for myself and others
Selling ability Record in part-time jobs
Hard worker College marks and outside activities (letter from Dean)
Knowledge of display Courses; I cannot qualify without more experience
Advertising, promotion Student activities
Ability to direct others  

<pg. 67>

Based on this list, Doris described what she had to offer an employer, in seven short pages. She stapled them into a neat binder she made herself of heavy cover stock.

The employment manager of the largest store in her home town was so impressed with this selling portfolio that he hired her. She accepted with the understanding that when she felt ready for a transfer she would be given the next vacancy in any department she chose. Nor did she begin at the usual starting salary; her folder proved she deserved more.

Let us take a quick glance at Doris' booklet. <pg. 68>

AIM

The aim and purpose of this booklet is to present my training, qualifications, abilities, and practical training in some tangible form in an effort to attain my final goal -- an executive position in fashion retailing.

Naturally I understand that wider selling experience must precede advancement to an executive position. I would like an opportunity to serve on your executive training squad.

            Doris Blake

<pg. 69>

TRAINING AT THE TOBE-COBURN SCHOOL FOR FASHION CAREERS

One year course of coordinated study in all branches of fashion work, specifically directed toward a fashion career in retailing and directed by experts in fashion and retailing fields.

1. Specific and coordinated work in Merchandising, Buying, Fashion Coordination, Advertising, Display, Fashion Reporting, and Salesmanship, with outstanding personalities in each field as instructors.

Result: Practice in making buying plans, planning co-ordinated promotions and displays, writing advertising copy and fashion news reports, and recognizing and tracing fashion trends -- all assets for a fashion executive in a retail organization.

2. Contact with the New York ready-to-wear market through trips to outstanding Seventh Avenue and Uptown Houses.

Result: Acquaintance with the market for coats, dresses, sportswear, and hats; a knowledge of resources that are suitable for the clientele of a particular store.

3. Selling experience at two department stores for a four-week period preceding Christmas, and a three-week period preceding Easter.

Result: A knowledge of the mechanics of retail selling; practical application of salesmanship training; contact with a large mass of customers and their problems -- the very basis for successful merchandising. <pg. 70>

BUSINESS EXPERIENCE

Sales experience in three department stores:

1. Carter's in Pittsburgh -- extra selling during June sales in 1940, in housedress department. Good sales record as compared with other extras. Called back for summer and Christmas work, but was out of city on both occasions.

Result: Experience in sizing up customers for Junior, Misses, Women's, or half-size dresses; ability to promote sales by very simple displays.

2. Macy's in New York -- pre-Christmas selling in 1940, in Youth Center, boys' and girls' dresses and suits to size 6. Superior sales record as compared with other extras. When asked by the school whether they would like to rehire me, Macy's answered "yes."

Result: Ability to apply salesmanship training to actual cases; ability to handle large number of customers and act quickly; ability to set up simple counter displays.

3. Bloomingdale's in New York--pre-Easter selling in 1941, in the College Shop. Excellent sales record. Personnel report stated "yes" on question of rehiring.

Result: Ability to please both mother and daughter. Experience in wardrobe planning and selection of clothes for all types, sizes, and shapes of girls. <pg. 71>

COLLEGE TRAINING Bachelor of Science Degree in Costume Economics at Larkspur College, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. Standing -- Second in a class of about one hundred girls.

1. Specific technical training in Clothing Construction; Textiles; Millinery, Principles of Design; and History of Art, Costume, and Furniture.

Result: A knowledge of fabrics and the ability to work with them; the ability to recognize and execute fine workmanship in the construction of women's clothing; creative ability in designing on paper and working in fabrics; a knowledge of Period Art, Furniture, and Costume as sources for modern designs and promotions.

2. Psychology and Education, Social Psychology, Practical Teaching in Home Economics.

Result: A knowledge of human reactions, both in individuals and in groups -- an essential in judging customers and their wants; the ability to understand children; the ability to conduct a discussion, organize a class, present material clearly, and teach skills -- valuable assets in dealing with both customers and personnel.

3.  General academic training in English, History, and the Sciences.

Result: An all-round cultural background.

4. Store Service Education -- work in the nonselling divisions of one of Pittsburgh's largest department stores.

Result: A knowledge, through actual experience, of the work carried on in the stock room, Bureau of Adjustment, Personnel Office, Comparison Office, and Display Department of a store. <pg. 72>

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES

Making for Executive Ability, Dependability, Ability to Organize.

1. President of Costume Economics Club, a college departmental organization which planned meetings, student fashion shows, and social activities which would unite the various classes within the department.

2. Secretary of Mortar Board, national senior women's honorary organization, consisting of ten senior women outstanding in scholarship and leadership. Correspondence with the national officers of the organization and with school administrative officials comprised the bulk of the secretarial job.

3. President of the Women's Activities Point System, which required organizing a committee to control and record the activities of officers in all women's organizations on campus.

4. Member of the Student Senate, elective governing body for the college. <pg. 73>

PRACTICAL DESIGNING AND DRESSMAKING

For the past five years I have designed and made all my own dresses, suits, and coats without the use of a pattern, but by draping them on a dummy figure. I have also made dresses for several members of the family and for a school teacher, all with problem figures requiring skillful fitting. In doing this, I was entrusted with the choice of style, color, and fabric.

As a result of these experiences, I have a knowledge of fabrics and how to handle them, of various figure problems and how best to deal with them in choosing clothes, and of fine workmanship in clothing construction. <pg. 74>

LARKSPUR COLLEGE
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania

April 25, 1941

Miss Julia Coburn Tobe-Coburn School for Fashion Careers New York City

Dear Miss Coburn:

Miss Doris Blake has asked me to write you about her work here. I am delighted to speak a word for Doris, as she is one of our outstanding students.

Her art teachers believe that she is talented and imaginative. Surprisingly, her standing in her other studies is equally high. She will graduate second in her class of 103 girls.

She is popular with students and teachers alike. She was elected secretary of Mortar Board, a national honorary society which is composed of just ten members of the senior class who are outstanding in both scholarship and leadership. She was elected by the students a member of the Senate, their governing body. She was president of the students' point system, which seeks to prevent any one student from overloading her time with extracurricular activities. She was elected president of the Costume Economics Club and served on many committees.

As you will recognize, these honors indicate an ability to take responsibility, to get on well with people, and to turn out a good day's work. Miss Blake gets things done and she does them well. To use a somewhat abused phrase in the student manner, she is "tops."

Sincerely yours,

Elizabeth Taylor
Dean of Women <pg. 75>

 

For the most part Doris makes a fine job of it. Note how she points up her school work and her summer experience in her "results" paragraphs. These very clearly depict the skills she developed and the talents she has.

Then read the last paragraph of the Dean's letter of endorsement. Observe how neatly the Dean spells out the relationship between what Doris has done in school and what she hopes to do in business. This is an important principle to follow. For when you can relate the problems you met and solved in the past to the job you seek now, you arouse your prospect's interest.

In her opening statement, "Aim" p. 69, Doris slips up just a bit. Pointing to her long-range goal is, in itself, an excellent idea. It indicates she will bring real zest to her work. But she should have wrapped this statement up in terms of her prospective employer's interests, not just her own. She might have said, for example:

My aim is to place at your service the selling skills and display techniques I developed through my department store experience and my training at Tobe Coburn. In helping you build up your women's wear sales I know I will also be moving toward my eventual goal, an executive position in fashion retailing.

Naturally . . . etc.

This says somewhat the same thing as the original. Yet obviously it is not the same. The difference lies in underlining the offer of a service.

Doris' booklet was so well conceived that its virtues more than balanced its slight defects. This is highly instructive. For no sales presentation can be absolutely perfect. But as long as you are aware of and follow the principles of good selling you need not fear an occasional slip.

What should go into your portfolio? What are the principles that underlie a sound one?

It may be best to approach these questions indirectly. Let us analyze a number of portfolios that clicked. As we take them apart, probe into their weak spots and search out their strengths, both the underlying principles and a checklist of specific content should emerge. We can then tie everything together into one neat package. <pg. 76>

[Bill Grogan, Newspaper Advertising Manager]

Newspaper Advertising Manager

Let's begin with Bill Grogan. Bill prepared one of the best portfolio campaigns we have seen and it is well worth careful study.

It was toward the end of World War II, while he was still in the Navy, that Bill Grogan dropped in at the Man Marketing Clinic in New York. Tall and lean, the humorous twist in the corner of his mouth belied the solemn look he bestowed upon us.

"Do you think I might pick up a few pointers here on running a job campaign from the deck of a ship?" asked Bill. "I expect to be shipped out again soon and maybe I should be thinking of other things. But I'm a little afraid the best jobs will be gone by the time I get back. So I'd like to do something about it now. If I can."

"Why not sit down and see how we do things here?" we suggested. "Then you might ask some questions and work up a plan."

"Thanks," said Bill. "I'll be all ears, I can promise you."

After listening to the ideas tossed around the Clinic and to the discussion that arose around a couple of questions he asked, Bill decided that a "prospecting" letter followed up by a portfolio was his best bet. (He would not, of course, be available for an interview.)

First he researched his market. He knew he wanted to work as advertising manager for a paper in the West or Southwest. With this in mind he visited the American Newspaper Association. On talking things over with a few people there he drew up a list of nineteen promising prospects. These were papers that seemed likely to grow in the postwar future.

Then he went to work on letter and portfolio. Here is the letter be wrote: <pg. 77>

U.S.N.
Armed Guard Center
New York, N. Y.

Mr. Leslie Grainger
Publisher, Dallas Post-Herald
Dallas, Texas

Dear Mr. Grainger:

When this war's over I'm pitching my tent Southwest. The spot in particular I'd like to stake my claim is in the advertising department of your newspaper -- especially as advertising manager. As a result of some talks with the American Newspaper Association, I feel your paper is going to grow after the war, and I think I can help it on the way. Here are some reasons why:

For one paper I built mid-week food advertising from nearly nothing to thirty per cent of the town's gross weekly.

For a shopping paper I planned, laid out, edited and sold most of the advertising for the Fall Home Furnishings Edition in two colors.

I planned and executed a campaign for national advertising that added twenty-five regional accounts at national rates.

A brief glance at my experience: Owner-publisher in college. . . . Four years with Centertown Publishing Co., advertising manager of group of four allied papers. . . . And, later, advertising salesman handling store accounts for the Kansas City Shopping Dispatch.

That can't tell the whole story, but it gives you an idea of the kind of story I could tell. I'd like to show you I am versatile enough to grow, and have experience enough to make that growth sound. In lieu of a visit with you, which my service in the Navy prohibits, I have prepared a small folder on my experience and what I have produced. Won't you let me send that to you? When you read my story I think you'll want to help me stake my claim.

May I hear from you soon?

Sincerely,

William Grogan,
Y2c c/o Detail Office <pg. 78>

Now let us dissect Bill's letter and see why it produced results. His opening paragraph is beautifully paced. Go back to the first sentence and read it again. It seems to depart from the accepted canons of good business writing. For it speaks of some thing of concern solely to Bill himself. But mark, that despite this license, Bill takes no liberties with the principles of selling. His touch is sure and he is always master of the situation.

That first sentence may be unusual. But consider first that he's writing to newspapermen who appreciate a dramatic, storytelling approach. Beyond this, Bill demonstrates here his technical skill as an advertising writer and promotion man -- qualities pertinent to the job he wants. In short, he molded his approach to conform to the "feel" of the newspaper world.

Neither in his letter nor his portfolio does Bill depart from the matter at hand -- selling a service. But he saturates his pitch with his own unique personality, lets a flash of humor dart in and out the pages, and blends it all together in a way to command attention and respect. This is indeed individuality, but individuality subject to the best laws of selling.

We can't all do this. And when an attempt to be clever falls flat, someone else gets the job. Still, if you are trying for a position where creative imagination and good writing are at a premium, you should try to let those qualities shine through your presentation.

Now Bill goes on to ask for a specific job -- advertising manager. Being specific, as we know, always helps.

Casually he mentions "some talks" that establish his interest in the paper he's writing to, and just as casually he promises a benefit: "I think I can help it on its way." There upon he immediately becomes crisp and businesslike with his staccato: "Here are some reasons why."

No matter what test one may apply, this is superb selling.

You must first dangle a benefit before your prospect's eye or there's no reason why he should hire you. Offering a service is not enough, however. Your prospect wants to know if you can come through with the service you offer. Both promise and proof must register clearly, quickly, and convincingly.

Bill immediately followed his "I think I can help" with proof. And wisely he centered each statement of proof so that it stood out from the rest of the letter. <pg. 79>

With a flick of the pen Bill runs through his experience, avoiding the dry tabulation of dates and places ordinarily used. Then he builds toward his close.

See how much he packs into one line with the sentence that begins: "That can't tell the whole story. .

This hint of untold accomplishments makes for another deft appeal to his prospect's self-interest. Bill can afford this neat buildup because, as his portfolio shows, he has plenty to back it up with. Not only does this bespeak a quiet conviction of his own ability but he offers to send proof along via his portfolio. And twice at the end he asks for action.

The response was terrific. Nine of the seventeen sent for the portfolio. And after reading the portfolio, seven of the nine asked to see Bill himself upon his discharge.

Before moving on to the portfolio, one other point in the letter is worthy of mention. Bill addresses the publisher by name. Moreover, by mentioning his talks at the American Newspaper Association, he makes a direct reference to his prospect's paper.

We can state this as one of the very few absolutes you will find in this book: Whenever you send out a letter, resume, portfolio, or whatever, find out the name of the man you want to reach.

Don't send your presentation to "Dear Sir" or "Gentlemen" or "Personnel Department." Get the name of the owner or the appropriate department head. Address your letter to "Dear Mr. Black" -- or Mr. Jones. Of course, if you can't find the name, that's another matter.

Now for the portfolio. <pg. 80>

U.S.N.
Armed Guard Center
New York, N. Y.

Mr. Leslie Grainger
Publisher, Dallas Post-Herald
Dallas, Texas

Dear Mr. Grainger:

Thanks for your letter of interest in my claimstake.

Tbis folder is to give you an idea of the kind of work I am capable of doing in developing that claim. I think you will agree that the job of advertising is to sell merchandise. This folder is designed to show how I have done it.

It is an honest account of five years' experience in newspaper merchandising. While it is built almost entirely of incidents, the whole, I believe, covers a valuable background in newspaper advertising.

I could have used another five pages describing my wonderful personality and beautiful wife. But, frankly, I would have been lying about the former and unable to do justice to the latter. I have been able to sell because I know merchandising and am honest . . . and have been able to convince the cus-tomer of these things. <pg. 81>

Increasing Mid-Week Advertising

When I became advertising manager of the Centerville News and three small affiliated papers in 1938, it was like having a bear by the tail. We had no advertising because we had no pulling power, and no pulling power because we had no advertising. Chief local revenue came from a few days in the year--opening of school, graduation, Thanksgiving, Christmas, and a few other special-events days. The advertising we did have was bunched on Fridays and Saturdays.

A Study of the Situation Indicated

1. Institutional advertising should be good for the middle of the week when is wouldn't be lost in the hunt for bargains.

2. A few good merchandising ads would stimulate others who were running pointless copy that was little more than business cards.

3. There was no reason why certain classifications of want ads would not pull as well in the middle of the week as on the week end.

This is What We Did

We set out to demonstrate some pulling power. I planned a city-wide sale, "For One Hour Only." I helped merchants select goods, plan store displays. I publicized it, planned the merchants' copy in the paper. We packed the streets and stores and "shocked" both advertisers and readers into a realization of the paper's power in selling goods.

We started plugging want ads with copy and over the counter, aiming at both advertiser and reader.

We presented pictures of buying crowds with layouts in series as suggested campaigns to logical prospects. <pg. 82> Increasing Mid-Week Advertising

RESULTS

1. Fresh, sparkling copy replaced "rerun" ads, and readers started buying from institutional copy that had something to say.

2. Injection of merchandising food copy caused three grocers to liven ads and use more space, with increases up to 50 per cent.

3. The Want Ad columns grew gradually and continually because promotion was never dropped.

4. The Centertown News became a vital factor in planning any selling campaign, and on occasion carried more lineage than the week end opposition.

5. At the end of the first year the News showed an increase of 25 per cent in local revenue. <pg. 83>

Building for and with Lumber Yards

Lumber advertising in Centertown was chaotic. One yard ran twice a month with us, twice a month with the opposition. One was "going to start soon." A third wasn't even interested. All this in a town that had built one hundred new homes the previous year!

Since these dealers were so jealous there seemed no chance of getting them to work together, we set the campaign as three separate problems--one for each yard.

For the first I made a quick survey of the town, found nearly two hundred homes needing paint badly. Then I planned and laid out a summer campaign for painting, tapering it into Fall Planning and Winter Comfort to make it run the full year. Presented with a sensible campaign not outside his budget, he took it, doubling his space and running every week.

The second, who was building most of the new homes under ERA, was glad to subscribe to a program that helped him with his selling, brought him new prospects.

The third I was still working with on a program of farm improvement when I accepted a better job in Kansas City.

RESULTS

The first eventually increased his space four times and successfullv introduced a new paint into the territory.

The second was solidified in friendship and became an "exclusive" customer because of the response to his ERA campaign.

The third had been built into a more receptive prospect although I had not sold him up to the time I left. <pg. 84>

A Jeweler Learns a Better Way Than Appeasement

Missouri's largest jeweler, C. D. Plummer, appeased all papers with a little advertising, but did his merchandising in the Daily Express.

He was satisfied with the job the Express did for him. And he was afraid to try our paper with any large space because the Express hinted he would get poor position there if he did.

I set out to prove that he would get results from an advertising campaign in one of our papers, the Shopping News. Since our paper was practically untried with jewelry advertising, I induced him to take the minimum necessary to get a front-page box. I insisted on helping him select the item for the box and we finally selected a watch chain. He had ordered a hundred for the season, but the single ad had him turning away customers inside an hour. Another shipment the next week brought the same stampede on a repeat ad.

RESULT

Many salesmen can persuade a merchant to try a newspaper. But it takes one who knows merchandising to get him to try it successfully. C. D. Plummer's trial in the Shopping News was just before I left. Because he had a "supervised trial" he was pleased with the results and has continued to use large space in the two years since. <pg. 85>

Maintaining Grocery Leadership

In Centertown our unquestioned leadership in the grocery field made us the object of much sniping--cut prices and trade cut" advertising. Our problem was to stay far enough ahead to avoid a newspaper war. In order to maintain that leadership without cutting prices or accepting a can of peaches for an inch of advertising, we worked out a three-way campaign:

1. To Keep Old Customers
we used both mail and personal calls to impress on them the value of our circulation. We made an effort to always have a part in planning a grocer's campaign, and to keep him planning.

2. To Get New Accounts Started

we strengthened our relations with wholesalers, jobbers, and jobbers' salesmen, so that we would know of any transactions pertaining to our city. Real estate men were also valuable allies in the campaign to get to the customer first. Twice we got an advance tip from another grocer.

3. To Add Small Accounts

we studied their problems and, wherever possible, found the solution in newspaper advertising. We were careful not to waste the small grocer's money on worthless advertising. <pg. 86>

RESULTS

Old Accounts Increased Space

One, who was running a split account, cancelled his other advertising and ran exclusively with us. Others increased space up to 25 per cent. Three New Food Accounts were landed by straight selling on the value of merchandising. Two of these used both our Tuesday and Friday papers. Neighborhood Stores  increased amount spent and several ran on continuity basis. <pg. 87>

A Druggist Didn't Like My_________ Boss!

Centertown druggists offered little as a source of revenue. One ran small space about four times a year to promote mail-order sales and the other ran twelve to thirty inches a month of institutional copy.

Net result was that neither got much tangible return from advertising. There was antagonism toward our papers because of the feeling we wanted to promote cutthroat competition. Most drug business went to Kansas City. The druggists thoroughly disliked each other.

Talking to each druggist individually, I asked them to study Kansas City drug ads with me. We compared prices, and I asked them to explain price drug advertising. We spent two months at this and reading trade journals.

At the end of that time I presented the more enthusiastic one with a program of regular advertising to run for one year. Then he broke out with all the pent-up fear of our motives, concluding his tirade with the exclamation, "As a matter of fact, I don't like your boss!"

I suppose I should have run, but instead I encouraged him to tell me all the things he didn't like about the boss, and when he had finished had him agreeing it was remarkable that a man as mean as that could build such a fine advertising medium. He wanted to know if he could talk my program over with his competitor, as he felt the town would be helped more if both of them advertised. Smart man!

Before he could talk with his competitor, I interviewed the other druggist with the same result. They were going to ask each other to start advertising!  <pg. 88>

RESULTS

1. The first customer used the program, but the second had it vetoed by his partner. However, the second started using "splurges" of price advertising to supplement his institutional copy.

2. Drug advertising increased four times.

3. Drug sales reached the highest peak in a decade. <pg. 89>

How I Increased National Advertising

Trying to give the department a workable policy, I set up the following source of leads to be cultivated:

1. Retailers.
2. Jobbers and Jobbers' salesmen.
3. Trade Journals.
4. Other newspapers.

This Is the Way I Worked:

1. The retailer, close to both the consumer and the manufacturer, was considered the best channel through which to exert pressure. Retailers were encouraged to request advertising of salesmen, to try to handle as many brands as profitable that would permit tie-ins. They were shown how their own sales and prestige of their stores could be increased by handling these.

2. No matter what a man was selling, I always tried to earn his friendship, show him how our papers could help him with his selling job. Wherever possible, I worked out conferences with the salesmen and retailer. The three of us worked together to sell the goods. In this way we trailed the staff working on any one account.

3. I begged, borrowed, or bought all trade journals possible that pertained to merchandising. From these I made notes of articles on new advertising programs starting, was often able to get the retailer to ask forthem when he bought.

4. Other newspapers gave clues to national advertising that might have been missed. I also checked for national classified and found a post card mailing brought profitable returns.

5. All this work was in addition to the regular correspondence with agencies and firms that did advertising direct. <pg. 90>

RESULTS

1. Our papers carried all national advertising in our town that was on a one-paper basis. This included such accounts as Ford, Dodge, Chevrolet, Pontiac, Electrolux, Conoco, etc.

2. Our papers carried most cooperative and local placement such as Frigidaire, General Electric, Cook's Paints, Seiberling, Buick, Folger's, Armour's, etc.

3. We opened over twenty-five sectional accounts such as flour, cereal, oil, paper goods, etc.

4. We carried Lever Brothers' campaign at full national rate when opposition wanted it at local. <pg. 91>

Ideas Kept Them Advertising

Both large and small advertisers like to be stimulated with ideas. If methods I used to solve problems mentioned in this folder seem but ordinary good business practice, perhaps the ideas submitted will give a key to why ordinary methods and hard work were so successful. Here are some of the ideas (most of them worked out with store or advertising managers) that clicked:

1. Third Anniversary sale for grocer--double truck in black with judicious use of red. A five-day program that appeared in the paper on Tuesday and Friday, with reprints (and item changes) on Thursday and Saturday. Ad was reproduced with lengthy article in N.R.O.G. bulletin.

2. Canned Foods promotion -- one that got pleasing comment and a picture from I.G.A. headquarters.

3. "What You Should Know About Vitamins" and "See Your Doctor First"-- informative drug ads on prosaic themes, but good enough to he reproduced in Publishers' Idea Exchange.

4. "A Tribute to ------," a series for a funeral home that received statewide recognition and built many friends for the firm.

5. Opening of new funeral chapel. A full-page formalinvitation, and another page of congratulations from outside. This followed the "Tribute" series and the two working together accounted for over one thousand guests registering for the open house. "Little Red Wagon" (ambulance) congratulations from Ford agency given partial credit for increase in use of Fords for ambulance service in Missouri.

6. "Slips That Pass in the Light," lingerie ad that has been reproduced or copied in nearly every city in the country. <pg. 92>

You Ask, "Can You Sell?"

Can you sell? is one of the most embarrassing questions ever asked a man.

Few of us are born salesmen. One man who worked for me, a meek, highly subjective, former rewrite man, hated to call on people, ask them to advertise. But he sold advertising because he used my way of selling. Since I found it hard to "drop in" and pick up an ad, I had to plan my work, have something to say and say it well. I had to plan my time so I wouldn't be tempted to drink coffee with my favorite customers.

Few "born salesmen" can offer more unusual evidence of the results:

1. I sold the town drunkard and the town bootlegger signatures on a prohibition ad.

2. I sold (by telephone) over one hundred signatures on a cooperative ad in two and one half hours.

3. I sold my insurance agency a series of ads.

4. I was the first (and only) in Centertown to sell paid advertising to medical doctors.

5. I sold "Dog Daze" and "April Fool" pages. These were such outright promotions that one merchant ran as copy, "Take my money, boys, but write me no ad."

I am no "pressure salesman" but know how to apply pressure judiciously to get maximum and long-lasting results. <pg. 93>

Four Months on the Shopping News

The four months preceding the outbreak of war, I worked as an advertising salesman on the Kansas City Shopping News.

I didn't burn up the town, but I did sell a contract on my first day and averaged one a week for the time I was there. I outsold all salesmen but the manager, the others including a former Scripps-Howard advertising manager. Some of the Things I Did

1. Opened display dry cleaning advertising.

2. Handled our only food account (about sixty stores).

3. Changed jewelry account from minimum to a merchandising user of space.

4. Opened two furniture accounts.

5. Wrote or edited all copy, planned and made up Fall Home Furnishings Edition, which ran in two colors. <pg. 94>

That's My Story

And that, Mr. Grainger, is my story -- the parts of it in which I thought you would be interested.

I've staked my claim. Now you certify it. Offers of a job as your advertising manager after the war would be welcome. But more welcome would be an invitation to talk things over with you if and when I get another leave.

I am anxious to know what you think of how I might fit into your postwar program. If there are any questions I may have left unanswered, please let me know, as I am anxious to settle as soon as possible the place where I am to build after the war. I can anticipate no more pleasurable place than your city.

Sincerely,

William Grogan,
Y2c U.S.N.
Armed Guard Center
New York, N.Y.

<pg. 95>

 

Note again how in the cover letter Bill creates a "this-is-for-you-only" feeling by once again addressing Mr. Grainger directly and by the thank you at the beginning.

In the body of the portfolio each illustration tells a complete story. The general situation he found; the specific problem he faced; what he did about it; and the results -- all come through in logical sequence. When the reader is through he knows Bill Grogan. He knows how Bill's mind works; he knows how Bill operates.

Mark well how Bill exploits layout techniques. None of his pages look crowded. When he wants to emphasize something, or stress a result, he surrounds it with plenty of white space. He indents, underlines, numbers. In one way or another he sets off his important points from the rest of his copy. And how adroitly he handles headlines! Look them over!

How I Increased National Advertising

This Is the Way I Worked

Some of the Things I Did

Maintaining Grocery Leadership

Results

Ideas Kept Them Advertising

That's My Story

For a change of pace a "story" head:

A Jeweler Learns a Better Way Than Appeasement

Plus a touch of humor:

A Druggist Didn't Like My _______ Boss!

All in all a truly superb job. Nor did it stop there. Some of the men on Bill's ship had their hometown papers air mailed to them. Included were four of the papers on Bill's list. Every so often he'd drop a line to the publishers commenting on an editorial or an interesting news item. In each letter he'd mention some of his refreshing ideas about selling space.

One publisher got so excited he cabled Bill -- at this point 10,000 miles away in the Pacific -- an impressive offer sight unseen! However, since three other papers headed Bill's list, he sent a cautious reply suggesting action be postponed until a face-to-face meeting could be arranged. <pg. 97>

Came the war's end and Bill was mustered out. Returning to the United States he looked up the home office of a great newspaper chain whose Southwest outlets had not answered his original letter. There he showed his portfolio to John Chandler, the national advertising manager for the entire chain. Immediately, Mr. Chandler mailed excerpts from the portfolio to three publishers in the chain. Each arranged an interview by wire. And soon Bill moved in as assistant advertising manager for the paper that headed his list.

Not everyone can write as well as Bill. However, when you compose your letter or prepare your portfolio you can strive for clarity, simplicity, sincerity, and conviction. You can help your reader spot essential facts at a glance. You can do this as Bill did by using headlines, by centering key sentences, and the like.

Above all, you can be specific. Be specific about the job you want; be specific about the problems you've faced, the work you've done, the results you achieved.

For example: "I did general typing in a statistical department" is somewhat vague. Much more precise would be: "I did tabular typing from rough-draft pencil copy of complex statistical reports with six to eight columns of figures. I also cut stencils."

Again: "I was in full charge of the company's library" doesn't say overly much. Whereas, you could paint a graphic picture by being specific. Like this: "I directed all the work in my firm's library. I recommended purchases; classified and catalogued all incoming publications; and prepared reference lists and bibliographies on engineering and machine shop subjects. I had full administrative responsibility for the functioning of the library and for the activities of the library staff."

Personnel Executive

Personnel executives have no sales curves to show, no sales quotas to beat, no spectacular savings that change red ink to black. As a result, their experience records often run to lifeless listings of functions any personnel man performs. Devoid of "sell" such listings are hardly calculated to inspire attentive reading.

[Ann Peters, Personnel Executive]

Yet any personnel executive can make the businessman sit up and take notice if he sells his services in terms of good, hard cash. Ann Peters set out to do just this. And succeeded.

Let her portfolio tell its own story. <pg. 98>


WARNER MACHINE TOOL COMPANY
ROCHESTER, MASS.

July 21, 19--.

Miss Ann P. Peters
322 East Avenue,
Rochester, Mass.

Dear Miss Peters:

I have read over the statement of your activities with the Warner Machine Tool Company. In no case have you overstated -- however, there is much more detail that cannot be put into a paper of this kind, but which would add greatly to your value wherever placed.

May I say that what pleased us most was your self-reliant nature. Our confidence was supreme that your foresight and ability would solve whatever situation arose. Whoever may use your services would be paid in this respect alone.

I am sure that our employees reacted to your spirit as we did. The run-of-the-mill labor troubles, which in other plants around us developed into expensive shut-downs and strikes, were almost entirely avoided under your leadership.

You cut our labor turnover to a fraction of its former figure; your work in accident prevention secured for us the lowest base rate in the state, while our experience rating credit almost doubled.

We cannot praise too highly the work you did for us. Only the closing of our plant could make it necessary for you to be seeking another field for your talents.

If I can ever be of service to you, please command me.

Sincerely yours,

Brooks A. Warner

Brooks A. Warner,
President <pg. 99>

 


1926 TO DATE

Director of Personnel in the three plants of the Warner Machine Tool Company, located in Rochester, Mass., and vicinity.

Total number of employees on roll: 8,000 men and 1,000 women.

Excluding general strikes, which shut down the entire industry, these three plants ran continuously, while other plants in the same territory, because of labor troubles, had periods of complete shut-down.

There were many misunderstandings in the plants of the Warner Machine Tool Company. The following situations were successfully handled: Slow-Down in Production

It was my duty to go into the different departments, get both sides of the story, and bring about a settlement between management and labor.

I was able to bring production back to normal; and in many instances, working with the Production Managers, I was able to increase production to a higher point than production on the same types of machines in outside plants. Sit-Down and Stoppage Situations

I was called many times to the plants and told:

"The employees in department _______ have stopped work."

"The employees in department _______ are sitting down."

"The employees in department _______ have registered ‘In' and have refused to start operations."

"The men in the transportation department have refused to load up their trucks for deliveries."

On each of these occasions I would go to the department and, if the question under discussion could not be settled immediately, I was always able to persuade the men to continue with their work until such time as conferences could be arranged. <pg. 100>

Union Negotiations

From 1936 on, the entire industry signed up for a closed shop agreement and thereafter it was my duty to meet with the union officials and plant delegates when differences arose.

A number of times I was asked by outside plants for advice and help in settling their problems. Personnel Administration

I had complete charge of three Personnel Departments, which were organized in 1926. This included:

1. Interviewing and hiring all employees for factory and office positions.

2. Follow-up on the job, through probation period.

3. Job analysis.

4. Readjustment of all rates and wages.

5. Installation of system to handle increases.

6. Transfer and discharge of employees.

7. Organizing and directing plant hospitals.

8. Handling Workmen's Compensation Insurance and settling claims with employees.

9. Safety program in the plants.

10. Handling all labor difficulties.

Labor Turnover

Previous to 1926 the average monthly labor turnover rate was 4.2 per cent. This figure was constantly lowered until in 1936 the average monthly rate was 0.5 per cent. Safety and Control System for Industrial Accidents

The system installed for the control of industrial accidents resulted in a tremendous saving in the rate of Workmen's Compensation Insurance.

The base rate per $1,000 payroll was the lowest in the industry in the state. The experience rate modification was increased from 26.2 per cent to 46.1 per cent.

The first-aid hospitals and their ability to render service <pg. 101> promptly and properly resulted also in increased production by returning employees to their duties and by avoiding malingering.

Labor Troubles

The Big Strikes of 1927, which closed all the plants in the area, affected one of our plants.

On May 8th the flying fleets and picket lines came to the plant, where 3,500 employees were on roll. The plant had been running at full capacity; work was in process; customers were calling for their merchandise.

The management questioned the advisability of recruiting men and attempting to operate. I advised that we start recruiting men immediately. Within two weeks the plant was fully manned; deliveries had not stopped; material had not been damaged.

Although the picket lines continued for eight months, the morale at the plant was good and there was no further walk-out.

In the relations between employer and employee, differences are constantly arising. If they are not satisfactorily handled, they may become ISSUES, the foundation of industrial strife. Learning to think with the workers' minds and see their viewpoint was the foundation of "peace."

1923-1926

Employed at the Warner Machine Tool Company, in charge of Engineering Cost and Payroll Departments. Combined engineering force consisted of six hundred employees.

Installation of Cost and Control System in the Production Departments of the plants; later in charge of this department. <pg. 102>


Here is a woman who was director of personnel in plants employing nine thousand workers in a section known for its industrial turmoil. During a time of union slow-down tactics she "was able to bring production back to normal... (and) ... to increase production to a higher point than production on the same types of machines in outside plants."

This means money for her firm.

Further, her safety and control system "resulted in a tremendous saving in the rate of Workmen's Compensation Insurance." Lest she seem to be laboring the point, she opens her portfolio with a letter from her former chief verifying her whole story.

See how cannily her former employer plays up the money-saving features of her work. Like the "expensive shut-downs" she managed to avoid. In the "You cut our labor turnover" sentence he expands further upon this point.

Tact and diplomacy are essential qualifications for personnel work. But Miss Peters never says "I am tactful." She gives examples that say it for her.

In cases of dispute, she remarks, "I was always able to persuade the men to continue with their work until such time as conferences could be arranged." Her plants "ran continuously while other plants in the same territory, because of labor trouble, had periods of complete shut-down." Packing the portfolio with such specific accomplishments gives it the desired "service-selling" touch.

Keynoted by the opening letter of endorsement, Miss Peters' folder also sings of personality -- of her sturdy, "sell-reliant nature." As we saw in Bill Grogan's case, a dash of personality mixed in with your presentation gives it a tremendous lift.

College Girl Looks to the Future

[Claire Small, Personnel Career]

Now that we've left Ann Peters it might be interesting to see what a young college girl did when just planning for a personnel career. While still in high school, Claire Small acquired a deep interest in industrial relations. Upon entering college she decided to use her summers to get practical experience that would help fit her for personnel work.

One day she called upon the personnel directors of three different firms that employed many women. In each case she asked <pg. 103> if she could send along some material that would allow for more meaningful study of her qualifications for summer shop work and for her long-range goal in personnel.

All three men expressed interest. So she sent each a folder made of a large sheet of heavy cover stock, folded twice. Inside it was one double sheet, somewhat smaller. She bound this home-made contraption with a needle and heavy thread, making a booklet of four pages. On the first page she pasted the letter on the opposite page (only the name differed in each case). <pg. 104>


Dear Mr. Morton:

It was interesting to talk with you about personnel work and employee relations, and I appreciate the time you gave me.

While in high school, I spent much of my senior year studying various vocations. I attended one of the Man Marketing Clinics quite regularly and took part in discussions of the qualifications of individuals present, and where they could best be used. Most kinds of white collar jobs were analyzed and many blue collar jobs. The more I attended these meetings, the more I realized that my main interest was in helping individuals to make the best use of their talents for the benefit of themselves and their employers.

Now I'm a junior at Columbus University. I plan to take every course I can which will enable me to understand employee relations better, and read on this subject on the side.

Each summer I want to do various kinds of work which will help me to be practical in my approach to these problems. As I told you, I would like to assemble packages or do other work in your shops which does not require too much training. My fingers are nimble, my hands and eyes work well together, and I like work. So I should be able to earn my pay as a new operator. And some day I shall hope to work in your personnel department.

I'm enclosing copies of personal data and my views on employee relations, as you suggested.

Very truly yours,

Claire L. Small <pg. 105>


PERSONAL DATA

Name: Claire Louise Small

Address: 105 South Elliot Place
City: Richmond, New York
Telephone: Richmond 5-0610

Nationality: American, English descent [Nationality and Age Information is no longer considered appropriate]

Age: 19 years
Height: 5 feet, 63~ inches

Weight: 128 pounds

Education: Richmond High School -- graduate honor student Columbus University -- two years, good grades

Foreign languages: Reading knowledge of French

Extracurricular activities:
Reporter and associate editor, Richmond Blade;
President, Richmond High Camera Club

Health: Excellent, have not lost a school day in two years <pg. 106>

VIEWS ON EMPLOYEE RELATIONS

Employees and their managers seem to me to want more of the same things than is generally appreciated.

Both want fair play for all.

Beyond that both want an opportunity to express themselves, to have their plans for improving the business and eliminating grievances fairly considered. They want experience or training to fit them for better jobs, and consideration when opportunity occurs.

They do not want shop politics or favoritism.

Favorable conditions such as these do not entirely do away with labor difficulties, but they reduce them and make peaceful settlements easier.

Claire L. Small <pg. 107>


Clearly, Claire did herself proud. With no experience to offer she shrewdly concentrated on displaying interest and the quality of her thinking.

The very statement of her plans shows a capable mind at work. In her "views on employee relations" her forthright personality shines through.

Nor does she lose herself in day dreams of future glory. She remembers to sell herself into a summer job. "My fingers are nimble, my hands and eyes work well together, and I like work."

The personnel directors went overboard on Claire's potential. They passed her portfolio around to others in the field, and it created interest wherever it went. And well it should. For Claire showed a surprising grasp of the subject for so young a person. As a result, she had a choice of jobs where an eye would be kept on her for future advancement.

Many young people -- and adults too -- could do as well as Claire if they planned their futures as thoroughly as she did. And as Claire proves, anyone can prepare a portfolio at his own level.

Comptroller

[R.S. Chapman, Comptroller]

R. S. Chapman is a substantial citizen. He takes an active interest in the affairs of his city and is president of the local Y.M.C.A. After ten highly successful years as comptroller of two fairly well-known firms, Mr. Chapman sought new fields.

Without much ado, he worked out a portfolio that served as the heart of his campaign for a comptrollership in a larger organization.

This is it. <pg. 108>


It is my belief that the two main functions of a comptroller are to floodlight the path of management with facts,

Facts by which to gauge performance,

Facts from which policies can be determined,

Facts as a basis for capital investment,

Facts for short- and long-range planning, and to interpret those facts.

To make figures vital, more than a knowledge of accounting is required--there must be an understanding of all phases of manufacturing and selling. Because I have worked as a laborer and as a foreman, because for many industries I have worked out definite problems of production and stock control and have devised factory accounting systems, and because I have had selling experience and have made sales surveys, sales figures have a real significance to me and I can interpret them with understanding. Attached is a record of typical results I have accomplished as comptroller or treasurer.

R.S. Chapman,
123 Valley Way,Larchville, N.Y. <pg. 109>


A LOSS OF HALF A MILLION CONVERTED TO A HALF MILLION PROFIT IN ONE YEAR

The A.M. Jones Corporation, of Sterling, Conn., had been the pioneer and for many years the leader in its field. But for six successive years it had lost money, until it was no longer considered a factor in the industry.

A new president, elected the middle of 1927, was confronted with a lack of cash, high operating and selling costs, and a demoralized organization. Before he could proceed he had to have the facts. He found reports from the Accounting Department biased and inaccurate. One of his first moves was to appoint me Comptroller. A month later I was made Secretary-Treasurer. What I Found

Accounting methods were loose, resulting in glaring inaccuracies and a profusion of figures without meaning.

The executive staff was unnecessarily large and inefficient.

Credit losses were high.

Manufacturing costs were high.

Relations at the banks were strained. <pg. 110>

What I Did

I improved accounting procedures and prepared reports of the vital facts which were used by executives and staff in the retrenchment program.

I made a study of administrative costs and functions, as a basis for sweeping reductions in personnel. With the reduced force, the efficiency of the organization actually improved. The total saving in salaries was over $200,000; $50,000 of that was in my department.

I found that the credit losses arose from an over-all liberal policy toward a few large customers. I re-established the authority of the Credit Department and reduced losses.

I found a part of the high manufacturing cost owing to obsolete equipment. We avoided a modernization program requiring a $500,000 investment by making a contract for purchase of material partially processed. This also made a substantial reduction in the costs and in the "in-process" inventory.

A full explanation to our banks of our reduced costs and future plans demonstrated the soundness of the new management and restored credit for seasonal borrowing. Results

The first full year (1928) with approximately the same volume of sales, a profit of S596,000 was earned -- against a loss of $622,000 the prior year. The President wrote, "I want you to know how much I appreciate your help. Your power of analysis has made it possible for us to make proper decisions."

Further improvements throughout the organization enabled us to maintain yearly profits in excess of a half million dollars, even through the difficult years of 1930 and 1931. At the end of 1931 I resigned to become Comptroller of Standard Home Products Corp. <pg. 111>

OUTRIDING THE DEPRESSION THREE TIMES AS WELL AS THE REST OF THE INDUSTRY

Since 1932 I have been Comptroller of the Standard Home Products Corp., manufacturers of food specialties. They sell wholesale, have a sales volume of over $5,000,000, and distribute east of the Mississippi. I reported directly to the President and was responsible for credits, insurance, legal and corporate procedure, as well as for all accounting.

What I Found

Manufacturing and distributing costs were not properly analyzed and lacked sufficient detail.

Expenditures were made by plant executives without reference to effect on costs.

Credit losses were high.

Insurance costs were excessive.

The bonus paid to plant executives was not related to profits earned by their plants.

There were no reserves to absorb current depreciation charges arising from overvaluations of machinery and equipment and from idle and surplus equipment.

Overcapitalization when the company was formed had resulted in arrears of $500,000 on the second preferred stock, with the prospect of its mounting higher; no dividends were possible for common. <pg. 112>

What I Did

I improved the accounting so that the President had the facts which enabled him to keep expenses in line with the depression curve.

I established reasonable limits beyond which home office approval was required on plant expenditures; thus no large sums were spent unless lower costs were assured.

I centralized control and reduced credit losses materially.

Through study I was able to get a better buy on our insurance. I initiated a concerted drive to reduce accidents, reducing costs over 40 per cent. The annual saving was $40,000.

Inaugurated a bonus plan based on plant profits which made executives as interested in profits as stockholders.

I worked out a plan which provided over $600,000 to write off obsolete and inactive equipment, thereby reducing depreciation charges.

We effected a reorganization plan that revamped the capital structure.

Results

This reorganization eliminated the preferred arrears, reduced dividend requirements annually over $200,000, and made possible the payment of dividends on the common stock.

The cash position of the company steadily improved, rising from a ratio of 2.1 to 1 to 4.8 to 1.

Current charges on depredation were cut S30.000 a year.

In terms of earnings, the company rode through the depression much better than the industry as a whole. This is shown by a comparison with the composite figures for eight leading competitors. Earnings for 1930 are used as 100.

                       1930   1932  1933  1934

8 Leading Competitors  100    35    26     25

Standard Home Products 100    10    75      78
<pg. 113>


Note how Mr. Chapman dramatized his outstanding achieve ments with these eye-catching captions: A LOSS OF HALF A MILLION CONVERTED TO A HALF MILLION PROFIT IN ONE YEAR and OUTRIDING THE DEPRESSION THREE TIMES AS WELL AS THE REST OF THE INDUSTRY He brings out the full value of his contributions to both firms by applying that excellent formula: what I found; what I did; what resulted. An executive to the core, he wastes no time on generalities. Instead, he lets incisive instances of what he has done build up a picture of the excellent comptroller he is.

Each line bristles with specifics. It reads fast, holds the attention, and leaves the reader with the thought, "Here's a comptroller who really pays his way!"

On his first page Mr. Chapman says, ". . . because I have had selling experience and have made sales surveys, sales figures have a real significance to me and I can interpret them with understanding"

This makes an important point, that here is a sales-minded comptroller. The selling experience is worked in as a definite asset to a comptroller, instead of being allowed to confuse the prospect by appearing as an irrelevant experience.

Most comptrollers, and most office managers as well, can show where they have saved money for their firms. But the idea of building, of increasing profits by adding something constructive to the business, of spending money to make more money, is much more rare. Stressing that sort of thing will help you stand out from the crowd.

Corporation President

It is easier to land a position as salesman than one as sales manager; it is easier to get a sales-managership than a position as general manager or president. The higher up the ladder you go, the greater the need for careful preparation and for extensive contact, and the longer the time usually required for transforming a lead into a definite offer. <pg. 114>

[Dwight P. Mallon, Company President]

Dwight P. Mallon had been president of two sizable corporations. In both he had inherited sharply declining sales curves that he turned skyward in relatively short time. Told in portfolio form, these would make impressive stories. As you can see. <pg. 115>

This is what a typical portfolio looks like. It is made of a soft cover stock, with pages approximately 8% x 11 inches, the cover slightly larger. When open, the portfolio looks like this.

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DWIGHT P. MALLON
Vanderbilt 5-1570,
355 Madden Avenue,
New York City,

September 19, 19--.

Richard B. Summerfield, Esq.
72 Wahl Street,
New York City

Dear Mr. Summerfield:

Since our brief talk I have prepared this confidential record for you, believing it may help you determine whether we should continue our conversations.

In April 1934 I became General Manager of American Cosmetics Corporation. One year later I was elected President. I found a business which had long been declining, even in 1927-8-9 and in 1934, years when the industry was going ahead. Within six months after I took the reins, we had made sharp gains, and ever since we have been gaining faster than our industry. Profits have followed the same trend.

Previously at the Morrison Tobacco Co., Inc., I faced a long decline, which we broke while the tobacco industry continued down. And each year since, gains have far exceeded those of the industry.

I had equally interesting results as General Sales Manager of the Arthur B. Jordan Co., Inc., manufacturers of chinaware, and as head of the Industrial Engineering Department, which I conceived and organized for the Arcade Oil Company.

Some details appear on the following pages.

There is also a list of thirty men, each of whom has seen me solve a problem of business or who has been in a position to observe the progress of the companies I have managed. I think you will know some of them. You may ask any or all about me. <pg. 117>

PRESIDENT, AMERICAN COSMETICS CORPORATION

In 1934 I became General Manager of the American Cosmetics Corporation, manufacturers of the well-known Band Box Beauty preparations.

My survey disclosed that: Sales had been declining since 1926, even in boom years. Some of the items in the line had lost so much appeal that they were a detriment. Novelty and new items were badly needed. The selling force was weak in organization, in training, in method. There was a lack of promotional planning. Sales and advertising were not working together for common specific objectives.

We did these things: Product research was immediately increased many fold. Four new items were introduced to replace dying ones. Every label was redesigned. The selling arm was completely reorganized, and its work better coordinated with advertising and promotional plans. The productivity of the detail salesmen was increased over 50 per cent, measured by the number of calls, by the orders taken for jobbers, by new displays placed. The average number of items displayed was increased 26 per cent. Distribution was increased on every item--a record in no wise equalled by competition.

As a result: A downward trend of seven years was broken in seven months. Sales and profits have continued upward since that time. I was elected President in June, 1935. <pg. 118>

TREND OF SALES--1926-1936 1929 -- 100% Legend American Cosmetics Cosmetic Industry (left chart) Drug Industry (right chart) Cosmetics Drugs

While sales in the cosmetic and drug industries were going ahead in 1927-1929 and in 1934, American's sales were going down.

In contrast, the adoption of the rounded program outlined on the previous page has changed the trend to one of steadily increasing sales and profits. Since the end of 1934, the increases have exceeded those of the cosmetic or drug industries. <pg. 119>

PRESIDENT, MORRISON TOBACCO CO., INC.

In 1930 I went to the Morrison Tobacco Co., Inc., makers of the Carmel and Don Roberto cigars. Within a year I was made President.

Here is what I found: The business had been slipping since 1926. It was essential that the popular Carmel cigar be priced at five instead of ten cents. The cost of making goods was unnecessarily high. The marketing end of the business was weak. There was no real sales leadership, few promotional plans, little consistent advertising.

Here is what we did: For well over a year I urged a trial of the five cent price. When it was finally tested in one area, it was the key to a rapidly expanding business. With the adoption of the five cent price, our income for each package was reduced 50 per cent. But we cut our manufacturing costs an equal amount, at the same time improving the product. Humidification and power costs were cut in two. Savings were made on all raw materials and processes. Our increased gross margins released funds for consistent advertising in an increasing number of markets. The selling force was reorganized and provided with ample selling weapons. Labels and boxes were redesigned. Counter display was increased many fold.

As a result: A dying business has been revived. More Carmel cigars were sold in 1934 than in any previous year. In 1935 there was another increase of 27 per cent. Dollar sales in 1935 were 70 per cent over 1932. Profits have increased even more. <pg. 120>

TREND OF SALES -- 1926-1935 1929 = 100% Legend Morrison Tobacco Tobacco Industry

Morrison sales were slipping from 1926-1929 while sales of the industry as a whole were increasing. Morrison sales continued down through 1932 faster than sales in the industry.

When the plans outlined were put in effect, Morrison sales started up sharply. However, tobacco store sales continued their depression trend for over a year thereafter.

Since the turn, Morrison sales have increased twice as fast as sales of the rest of the industry. <pg. 121>

GENERAL SALES MANAGER ARTHUR B. JORDAN CO., INC.

In 1928, I became General Sales Manager of Arthur B. Jordan Co., Inc., manufacturers of china tableware.

My analysis showed: The business had been going downhill since 1920. The local management had little understanding of aggressive merchandising methods. The patterns were not generally as acceptable to consumers as those of competing lines.

Here's how the problems were met: For months we had frequent evening meetings of the executives to develop an understanding of aggressive merchandising so that plans would be approved. A unique and inexpensive plan gave us reactions from thousands of consumers to proposed chinaware patterns. These opinions served as a guide to our designers and provided excellent material for promotional plans with dealers and consumers. The sales force was revitalized and provided with merchandising plans.

Results: The educational work and the revamping of lines were necessarily slow. Nevertheless in a year and a half the long downward momentum was arrested. It was not long thereafter that the business was sold.

Mr. Seth Y. Jordan. president of the company, has appraised my work on the following page. <pg. 122>


ARTHUR B. JORDAN CO., INC.
Manufacturers of Louvre China
OSCOLA, NEW YORK
OFFICE OF THE PRESIDENT

March 1, 1930.

Dwight P. Mallon, Esq.,
Oscola, New York.

Dear Mr. Mallon:

In our opinion your services to Arthur B. Jordan Co., Inc. were of exceptional merit. By means of intelligent research and the application of modern methods, you converted the sales organization into aggressive merchandisers and injected a new spirit throughout the entire organization. You handled difficult educational problems with tact and good judgment.

I greatly regret that the sale of this company's business and assets may mean that we shall have less contact with you.

Yours sincerely,

Seth Y. Jordan
Seth Y. Jordan, President <pg. 123>


HEAD OF INDUSTRIAL ENGINEERING DEPT., ARCADE OIL COMPANY

After I got out of the Army, I went with the Arcade Oil Company, without title and without specific duties.

I observed that: The cost records at their great mechanical works were sixty days behind and so inaccurate as to be practically valueless. A physical inventory of mechanical stocks had never been taken, nor could it be taken without changing the storekeeping methods.

To cope with these and similar problems: I recommended and organized the Industrial Engineering Department. The Department furnished accurate cumulative costs not more than forty-eight hours old and with appreciably less clerical help. It organized the methods of handling mechanical stocks at a saving of over a half-million dollars in inventories. It arranged for detailed as well as general designing to be done in the Engineering Department instead of in the field and shops. It gave the shops their first operation standards, which clearly pointed out reasons for excessive costs. The General Purchasing Department, the Accounting Department, and other divisions called in our staff on various problems of organization and method.

Mr. R. A. Montgomery, my chief, has written of my work on the following page. <pg. 124>


ARCADE OIL COMPANY
GUNTHER REFINERY
GUNTHER, NEW YORK

March 5, 1924.

Mr. Dwight P. Mallon,
322 South 96 Street,
New York City.

Dear Mr. Mallon:

I am glad to say a word concerning your four years' connection with the Arcade Oil Company.

As head of the Industrial Engineering Department your work has involved the application of the principles of organization and the development of better administrative procedure, particularly at our Gunther plant.

Your work has been characterized by energy and vision. You have the ability to present your case fully and clearly, in writing or in person. You have gained the respect and cooperation of those with whom you have come in contact, superiors and subordinates.

The Industrial Engineering Department has laid the foundation for much more efficient operation of our plants.

Yours very truly,

R. A. Montgomery,
Superintendent <pg. 125>


IF YOU'RE INTERESTED IN BEGINNINGS

My apprenticeship in marketing was served with Van Brink and Company, selling cocoa and coffee; with the M. A. Dwight Co., devising and selling business forms; and with the Eastman Supply Company. Mr. C. A. Priestley, president of the last company, comments on my work on the opposite page.

My studies at Cornell University were completed in 1917. I specialized in business subjects and have an A. B. degree. I earned my way entirely, by acquiring an interest in a sporting goods store. <pg. 126>


EASTMAN SUPPLY COMPANY
Manufacturers of Leather Specialties
122 LAKE STREET
New York City
C.A. PRIESTLEY, PRESIDENT

April 30, 1930.

Mr. Dwight P. Mallon,
822 South 96 Street,
New York City.

Dear Mr. Mallon:

It is an easy task to write of your work with us. The record speaks for itself.

Less than a year after you came you were made Vice President and Sales Director. By that time you had written over $150,000 worth of business in the department you started.

I never knew anyone to work with more energy. In the field the men you selected and trained became productive in an unusually short time. On the promotional side, I can only say that to discuss sales campaigns with you is champagne to me.

If I can be of service any time, say the word.

Cordially yours,

C.A. Priestley
CAP:W  <pg. 127>


These men know me and my work. I have been responsible to the first four. The next four have been responsible to me. The next four are advertising agency executives who have worked on the accounts of the companies I have served. The others know me and my work from varying angles. (Thirty men here listed with their titles and addresses.) <pg. 128>


Richard B. Summerfield, Esq.

If I have consistently been able to increase good will, morale, sales and earnings for the companies I have managed, it is because I have approached each problem with an open mind. Then, too, I have so organized that the entire personnel has contributed its full experience and ability.

Because I have a strong conviction that I could help the company, of which we spoke, to increase its sound growth, I sought you. At your convenience, I should like to meet with you again.

Meanwhile, thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

Dwight P. Mallon
DPM:W <pg. 129>


Mr. Mallon knew full well that sales curves vary with general business conditions. That's why he dramatized his part in the increased sales and profits with charts comparing the sales curves of his companies with those of the industry as a whole.

These charts highlighted his own role. Before his administration, sales of his firms were falling while sales for the industry as a whole were on the rise. But after Mr. Mallon's policies went into effect, his companies' sales increased much faster than those of the industry. He uses a yardstick to measure accomplishment.

You will notice how Mr. Mallon slants his cover letter to impart the useful made-just-for-you tone: "Since our brief talk I have prepared this confidential record for you.

Examine his portfolio carefully. Nowhere does he create a "job-hunting" impression. You get the flavor of a progress report that "may help you determine whether we should continue our conversations." You get a sales message about executive talent.

Not by accident does Mr. Mallon follow the same procedures we have seen before. "My survey disclosed; we did these things; as a result." In keeping with his presidential status, he carefully fashions a sober, dignified, and businesslike presentation. He avoids waste motion. He makes his point, goes on to the next.

The full Mallon story beautifully illustrates what a complete campaign calls for. His portfolio was the foundation stone. From it he extracted his best sales points for a general letter to get leads. With it at hand he was always ready to answer an occasional advertisement for an executive. He condensed the story for a display ad in the financial section of the New York Times.

He put the portfolio in the hands of employment agencies, advertising agencies, bankers, and friends who were eager to make contacts for him. In his interviews he used the material to show how he met problems similar to those facing his prospect's business. He sent the portfolio as a follow-up to promising interviews.

He spent ten hours a day, six days a week, on his campaign and kept a secretary busy half time. Though times were definitely bad and though he was seeking a position as chief executive in a fair-sized concern, he uncovered thirty-six possibilities in which he had some interest. <pg. 130>

There were always a half dozen definite leads to chase down, always more people to look up who were in a position to give him new introductions and leads. Most of these contacts were so much interested in his portfolio and verbal presentation that they sent him on to their friends in an endless chain.

In retrospect, Mr. Mallon looks upon his campaign days as a period of significant growth -- as well as among his busiest. A part of each day was spent on the phone, making appointments, checking the status of this or that situation, keeping interesting leads out of pigeonholes. Evenings were spent on correspondence, planning, and study of the markets and problems of the best leads of the moment.

Positions of the type Dwight Mallon wanted are seldom filled without long negotiation. The mortality of leads is high.

Often the members of the board must be sold; then the president decides not to retire just yet.

Often the position depends upon the launching of a new enterprise or the expansion of an old one. But after months of negotiations the principals may decide not to launch the new venture, or to postpone it.

During the six months of his campaign, Mr. Mallon saw many such leads he had thought practically certain drop from his grasp. Others developed into offers he did not find sufficiently interesting when all the facts were in.

Finally he received an offer that he found attractive. When be spoke of it to the best prospects in his list, three of them made counterproposals. Thus he had four positions to choose from, all of them with definite appeal.

This does not finish the tale. Six months after Mallon moved into the position of his choice, a fifth offer came out of his New York Times ad.

And a full year after he ended his campaign, still another interesting situation arose from it. At the height of his campaign a business acquaintance introduced Mallon to an important financier. After a productive interview, Mallon left his portfolio. One year later the head of a grocery chain told the financier they were looking for a chief executive. "I know just the man for you," the financier said. And he <pg. 131> reached into a drawer and pulled out Mallon's portfolio! Although the president of the grocery chain sought Mr. Mallon out, he preferred to stay where he was.

Engineering Executive Trainee

[Charles Stegman, Engineering Trainee]

Descending from those executive heights, let us watch a beginner in action. Back in 1949, the authorities of Northeastern Technical College invited us to discuss our Man Marketing Plan with the senior class. This exposure to Clinic ideas galvanized Charles Stegman, an engineering student, into purposeful action.

Picking up a copy of the original edition of this book, he read it from cover to cover. Then he went to work.

First he mapped out his present and future goals. This chore finished, he spied an exciting notice on the college bulletin board. A recruiting representative of the General Instrument Company was coming to campus on a hunt for executive trainee material. Charles signed up for an interview, then dug up all the dope he could find on General Instrument.

Upon careful weighing of all the facts he unearthed, Charles decided that General Instrument was "It." Angled squarely at that one company, the portfolio he prepared is a prime example of the "rifle" or one-shot approach. Here it is. <pg. 132>


WHY I AM SEEKING EMPLOYMENT WITH THE GENERAL INSTRUMENT COMPANY

General Instrument Company looks to the future. Policies are not set today with the expectation that they will produce results tomorrow. General Instrument Company is a small, personal organization. It offers the personal contact which is the foundation of good management and efficient operation. General Instrument men never stagnate. The engineer's work is intensely interesting, and there is no ceiling to his advancement. He may go as far as his ambitions and abilities will carry him. General Instrument Company is a symbol of progressive engineering. Sound business practice combined with the constant awareness of new developments in the field of instrumentation makes General Instrument a leader in its field. General Instrument Company engineers are proud to be General Instrument Company men. The company representative is welcomed wherever the General Instrument business card is presented. General Instrument Company offers a Cadet Training Program. The student engineer receives the confidence and knowledge he needs to do his job in a skillful and competent manner. General Instrument Company engineers become all-round engineers. The General Instrument engineer receives training in all phases of the company's operations, and in this way has a better understanding and confidence in himself and his company. General Instrument Company takes its employees' interests to heart. General Instrument offers a combination engineering-business vocation. This thwarts any tendency toward monotonous routine. <pg. 133>

UNITED STATES NAVY EXPERIENCE: 1943-1946 General:

Two years' experience on the repair, installation, and maintenance of radio, radar, fire control, and sonar systems.

One and one half years in charge of all electronic equipment aboard a Navy gunboat.

Extensive laboratory and class-room work in the communications engineering field. Operational and Supervisory:

Performed duties in radio and radar transmitting rooms, repairing and adjusting as necessary for efficient operation.

Operated electronic equipment to instruct radiomen, radarmen, and sonarmen in the finer points of adjustment.

Prepared electronic equipment reports on all phases of operation, analyzing vacuum tube and component part failures.

MY EDUCATION AT NORTHEASTERN TECHNICAL

Degree: Bachelor of Electrical Engineering.

Studies Which Will Apply Directly to My Employment:

Heat Engines
Economics for Engineers
Fluid Mechanics
Business Law
Applied Mechanics
Public Speaking
Structures
Electronic Majors

Honorary Recognition

"Who's Who Among Students in American Colleges and Universities." Selected as one of seventeen from 483 seniors in Class of 1950.

Pi Delta Epsilon (National Honorary Collegiate Journalism Fraternity). Qualified through my editorship of the Northeastern Technical Integrator. <pg. 134>


NORTHEASTERN TECHNICAL COLLEGE
OFFICE OF THE DEAN OF MEN
COPY

January 10, 1950.

Mr. Charles E. Stegman
94 Pine Street
Deerkill, New York

Dear Charles:

Your election to "Who's Who Among Students in American Colleges and Universities" is significant indication that you have given unselfishly of your time to the enhancement of student life and activities in addition to meeting your scholastic requirements with credit.

The qualifications of leadership and tolerance are most important in these troubled days, and it is a pleasure for me to congratulate you as a standard bearer of these character istics.

Sincerely,

K.M. Hudson
Dean of Men <pg. 135>


RECORD OF EMPLOYMENT

Firm: Dorema Bros., Inc., New York, N.Y.

Business: Manufacturers' Export Managers

Period: July 9, 1947 to October 24, 1947.

POSITION: Purchasing Agent

Department: Radio and Electrical Equipment

DESCRIPTION OF DUTIES

Processing of orders for radio and electrical parts and equipment. Handled own correspondence with customers, foreign representatives, shipping companies, and manufacturers. Correspondence included acknowledgments, expediting, information, invoices, allocations, and export licenses. Pricing and markup. Phone and mail quotations. Responsible for the execution of letters of credit. Processing orders for refrigeration parts and equipment as assistant to Refrigeration Department.

REMARKS

I received two increases in wages of $5 per week while in the employ of Dorema Bros. as a recognition of service and the detection of two errors which would have led to the loss of appreciable sums of money for the firm. <pg. 136>


THE PERFECTREX CO.
Manufacturers' Export Managers
189 Liberty Street,
New York, N.Y. COPY

April 27, 1949

To whom it may concern:

I have been requested by Mr. Chas. E. Stegman to furnish you with a resume of his services with Dorema Bros., Inc., New York City.

Although I am no longer in the employ of that firm, I am pleased to state that Mr. Stegman was employed, as Purchasing Agent, in the department under my control.

Mr. Stegman's work consisted mainly of correspondence pertaining to radio materials. This work required a fair knowledge of radio theory, mathematics and common sense. He also pleasantly assumed tasks outside his usual routine. He more than once utilized his knowledge of typing and short hand to the firm's advantage.

I wish to add that his services had been completely satisfactory at all times. He has proven himself cooperative and conscientious. It was with sincere regret that we received Mr. Stegman's decision to return to school.

Hoping the foregoing will assist you, we remain,

Very truly yours,

THE PERFECTREX CO.
D. C. D'Agostino,
Treasurer <pg. 137>


RECORD OF EMPLOYMENT

Firm: "The Viewer"

Business: Pine View, New York, weekly newspaper

Period: June 25, 1948 to September 3, 1948

Departure: Return to college

POSITION: Editor

DESCRIPTION OF DUTIES

Composition of Editorials Solicitation and contracting of advertising Sales and circulation Advertising layout Sheet makeup Compilation and verification of news reports

REMARKS

This position yielded returns commensurate with the success of the newspaper. "The Viewer" sold for five cents per copy. Editorship was offered to me by the founder, Edward Bradley, although he in no way held jurisdiction over the administration or financing. "The Viewer" has been in publication for 14 years, serves a community of 500 people, and is published under contract with a Malone, N. Y., printer.

POSITION: Community Entertainment Chairman

REMARKS

This position was elective, non-salaried, and made by the Pine View Association. I was responsible for the hiring of an entertainment manager; had custody of the Community Hall; planned, scheduled and publicized two entertainments per week for a period of seven weeks; responsible for receipts and expenditures: the general character of such entertain   ment programs for the people of Pine View, N. Y. <pg. 138>


STATION WEXY
Canton, N. Y.
COPY

April 26, 1949

To whom it may concern:

I understand you are contemplating employing Mr. Charles Stegman of Deerkill, N. Y. I would like to take this opportunity to tell you what I know of Mr. Stegman.

For two years he was a student at the local branch of Northeastern Technical College, and during that time I had the pleasure of meeting him at several college and local functions. When it was time to consider applicants to publish and edit our weekly newspaper at nearby Pine View, a summer resort, I believed him to be most eligible.

Subsequent events proved that my judgment was correct, and he performed a splendid job for us at the summer resort, both with the weekly newssheet, and as entertainment chairman for the community. Mr. Stegman is a high type young man of impeccable honesty and integrity. He is most intelligent, and to my way of thinking, an asset to any organization.

I also know Mr. Stegman to be free from bad habits, and to be scrupulously neat and very presentable in appearance. From my association with him, let me say that I would be proud to have him work for me at any time.

Very truly yours,

Edward G. Bradley
President and Manager <pg. 139>


RECORD OF EMPLOYMENT

Firm: United Day Systems, New York, N. Y.

Business: Operating systems and advertising specialties

Period: July 11, 1949 to September 16, 1949

Departure: Return to college

POSITION--Assistant to Executive

DESCRIPTION OF DUTIES

Assisted in the editing and publication of a 32-page, combined, annual advertising and log book circulated among 6400 fuel oil distributors and oil burner retailers. Handled own correspondence Assisted in the planning and execution of direct mail campaigns Processed orders Phone and mail quotations Accompanied executive on numerous visits to his accounts for both sales and public relations purposes. I was permitted to make these trips as part of my training. Familiarized myself with bookkeeping processes, invoices, billing, statements, and shipping procedures of printed material and fragile equipment. Prepared layouts for advertising specialty items. Acted as liaison between printing department and office. Instructed customers in business system operating procedures. Had charge of making order deadlines. <pg. 140>


Dorr, Henderson & Gould Company
Manufacturing Fraternity Jewelers
Detroit, Michigan

COPY

October 24, 1949.

Mr. Charles E. Stegman
Editor-in-Chief
Northeastern Official Directory
94 Pine Street
Deerkill, N. Y.

Dear Mr. Stegman:

Thank you very much for your letter of the l8th offering us advertising space in the official student directory.

Unfortunately, our advertising budget is made up well in advance of the college year, and I am sorry to tell you that it will be impossible for us to accept your kind offer.

I might say in passing that your letter was one of the best letters we have received in here for a long time. It was a marvelous sales letter, and I don't know what you intend to do after you finish college, but if this letter is a sample of your ability, I would say that you are headed in the right direction and right business.

I can only say that we are sorry that we cannot take advantage of your offer.

Cordially yours,

Dorr, Henderson & Gould Company
Joseph E. Garner <pg. 141>


As with Claire Small, Charles saw that whatever else he might do he could make his abiding interest in General Instrument pay dividends. He played that theme for keeps.

Scorning a bare statement of his high regard for the firm, Charles went in heavily for facts. He simply flooded his first page with facts that made good, common sense of his "why I am seeking employment with General" opening.

True, he might have worked out a service-selling approach. But as a college senior his sincere display of interest served him equally well. Some of his service qualities came through indirectly.

No one could possibly miss the care he had lavished upon his study of the firm's history and activities. Such thoroughness is quite an asset in a budding engineer.

Charles makes excellent use of his Naval service. The functional headings he uses makes for a quick grasp of the broad practical experience he gained.

Wisely, he expands on his extracurricular activities and his election to "Who's Who Among Students." For this stamps him as a well-rounded person, a potential executive.

Even though they were of minor import in the light of the total impression made, two weaknesses should be noted.

First there is the letter addressed "to whom it may concern." Such a salutation is bad. It smacks too much of the job hunter. And it negates the intimate this-is-between-you-and-me effect you want to try for. Have your letters of endorsement addressed either to you or to a definite prospect.

Then we come to Charles' summer job record. Intent on outlining all his duties, he neglects the chance to show his mind at work. Surely he could have given some instances of problems he met, how he handled them, and results he achieved.

Dawned the day of his interview with Mr. Trent. Educational Director of General Instrument Company. Portfolio in hand, Charles walked into the interview room and made his presentation. In his own words. "Mr. Trent was unable to conceal his approval. ………………When I walked out of that interview I knew I had the job I wanted."

Charles was right: the offer arrived the following week.

For fifteen years prior to his session with Charles, Mr. Trent had <pg. 142> been visiting college campuses. He averaged some three hundred interviews a year. Yet never before had he seen such a well-written presentation on the college level.

The impact of Charles' portfolio bit deep. Mr. Trent talked to thirty Northeastern Tech seniors in all, twenty of whom ranked higher scholastically than Charles. But Charles was one of the two men hired.

Still more, when he visited the General Instrument plant that April, he met five of the firm's officers. Each one of them greeted Charles with: "Are you the man who prepared that fine portfolio?"

This gives the full measure of what a well-planned campaign can do for you. It not only lands you in the job you want, but it marks you as a man to be watched.

For a full account of Charles' story and of how he helped five classmates use portfolios to equally good advantage, we refer you to his letter reproduced in the Appendix.

Starting Up the Sales Promotion Ladder

[Bob Jordan, Sales Promotion]

We come now to Bob Jordan. Just out of college, equipped with a degree and a yen for sales promotion, Bob looked at the world with eager eyes.

Summers he had worked in a filling station. In his spare time he had studied the sales literature he found there: maps, placards, funny sheets, letters to car users. Reading these gave him pointers on how to increase business.

Despite its value, this sales material often got kicked around the office--unused. Mailing pieces designed to reach customers before the 4th of July rush, came too late to be used at all. As he watched and worked and read and thought, Bob began to understand why some advertising material appealed, why others did not.

Reviewing his experiences, Bob decided to aim for a spot in the advertising department of a major oil company. He knew he could be useful there. He could shepherd the sales pieces along so that they reached the dealers at the right time, in the right quantities, and with proper instruction for their use. He looked forward to the time he would help plan this promotion literature. But for now he wanted to get a grip on the first rung of the ladder. Ablaze with ambition, Bob made the rounds. But he bounced <pg. 143> smack against some hard brick walls. Every personnel interviewer he saw said regretfully. "No openings in advertising." He tried to get through to the advertising managers. "Job?" asked their secretaries; "try the personnel department."

Disgusted, Bob talked things over with an older friend who steered him to one of the Man Marketing Clinics. There Bob saw daylight. For he discovered that selling technique applies to the job market.

"Why not sell my abilities with the same ideas that sell gasoline -- sales promotion ideas?" So Bob reasoned, and so he acted.

Sold on the portfolio medium, Bob made a rough draft of his story. He brought it to the Clinic, asked for criticism. When he was finished, he had everything he wanted to say on four typewritten sheets, bound in an attractive cover. Let's look it over.


(Page 1 of Bob's Portfolio) You spend time and money on your sales promotion, helping your dealers and their salesmen to sell more gas and oil. Your material is good. Many of your dealers put it to good use, to build more sales for you. But other dealers waste it. I have been one of the chaps who fill up the gas tanks, who check the tires and the battery and the oil. I have used all the promotion materials I could get my hands on. I have used it to increase my sales. I have noticed which promotions produce the most business; I have some ideas about why they succeeded. I have seen valuable material go in the waste can: Because it reached us too late to be used. Because we received many more copies than we could use (sometimes we also ran short). Because it was not suited to our market. Because our attendants weren't taught how to use it. <pg. 144>


(Page 2) I would like to help you eliminate any waste of your promotion materials. As a member of your promotion staff, I would like to see that your dealers ----- get the right material ----- in the right quantities ----- at the right time ----- with adequate instructions ----- and education of their staffs.


(Page 3) I believe I can do this job well, because – I know some of the problems of the dealer and his staff, some of the reactions of the consumer; I know what it means to work hard – Through two summers' work as attendant in the Gultex Station of McBride Brothers, Caldwell, New Jersey.

My first summer I was one of three new boys, and the only one asked to return the next summer, and with an advance in pay.

Mr. McBride thinks well enough of my work to offer me a permanent job, but I have my heart set on the promotion work.

Mr. McBride has said he will be glad to answer inquiries about my work.


(Page 4) I have a good educational background: A graduate of Central College, Vandalia, Pa., Class of 1940. I was not a brilliant student, but not even once was my name on the list of students who had fallen behind in a subject. <pg. 145>


Graduate of Eastern High School, Wilmington, Delaware, Class of 1946. I have handled many details creditably: In college I was secretary of my class and served on some seven committees -- unimportant in themselves, but perhaps indicating some reputation for getting things done accurately and dependably. May I have a chance to show that I can handle the details of your promotion department accurately and creditably? May I help you eliminate waste of your promotion money?


Measured against tough professional standards Bob's little promotion folder may lack polish. But at its own level it would be hard to beat.

Every page of this easy-reading portfolio is loaded with "sell." Artfully he works on his prospects' own interests. "You spend time and money on your sales promotion," he reminds his readers in his very first sentence. But, he goes on to say, "I have seen valuable material go into the waste can."

On the second page he makes a forthright offer of an important service: "I would like to help you eliminate any waste of your promotion materials." Then, in a manner reminiscent of Bill Grogan, he quickly lets his prospects know he can render the promised benefit. "I believe I can do this job well, because --"

He closes with an appeal for action bound up in a benefit package. "May I help you eliminate waste of your promotion money?" he asks, and signs off.

Armed with a few copies of his booklet Bob went forth to battle once again. This time he conquered.

Calling each company beforehand, he asked for, and got, the names of the advertising managers. Then he simply went up to each receptionist and asked, "Will you please take this folder in to Mr. Grant? (Or Mr. Jones.) I'll wait for his reply."   <pg. 146>

Doors opened, interviews followed. And on his third try he landed a very satisfactory job.

The Principles of Sound Portfolio Preparation: A Summing Up

The portfolio, in common with all other sales presentations, can take various forms depending upon the content and the kind of job you're after. Your portfolio may be no more than three or four sheets of typewritten paper, or it may be as large as a newspaper page, elaborately illustrated and handsomely bound.

We have seen portfolio headlines hand-lettered; we have seen them merely written in a bold script in white ink on black portfolio sheets; we have seen them typed in large poster type; we have seen the letters cut out of colored paper; we have seen cut-out arrows and exclamation points.

Unless you are trying to demonstrate ability along advertising, promotional, or artistic lines, you will probably not try to make your portfolio an original work of art. If that sort of thing is fun for you, all right. But cleverness must be clever; simplicity is much safer. A simple and dignified presentation can be very pleasing to the eye and easy to read. After all, the form is only a vehicle to center attention on your qualifications.

Most portfolios are individually typed. Others are mimeographed or duplicated on the Hooven Automatic typewriter.

Some sort of loose-leaf arrangement makes your portfolio more flexible. It allows you to remove pages that have no appeal to a given prospect. Conversely it enables you to insert something of specific value to another prospect. It also makes it easy to add cover letters addressed directly to each new prospect.

If the nature of the material in your presentation is such that it can be reproduced readily, it has added value, because you may then have a number of presentations working for you at the same time. But in any case, if you spend the time and care necessary to prepare a good presentation of what you have to offer your next employer, you will have an excellent base for your whole campaign.

But whatever the form or shape, it must be molded to meet the requirements of the job. And it should follow that first principle of selling: the offer of a benefit backed by evidence.

Regardless of their individual differences the portfolios we

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